TAT skills are very important in SSB, it’s the main part of the psychological tests and also PPDT requires perfect skills in writing a story. Earlier we discussed “How to write a story in TAT“, now this post is regarding the common mistakes done by candidates while attempting TAT.
Conditions Responsible to Make a Story Undesirable and Psychologically Weak
Let’s look into a story, which would put light on the common stories made by the aspirants at the SSB’s.
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Story:
Mahesh hailed from a remote area. He was a hard working and sincere student,who always thought about the development of his village. Mahesh completed his studies and became an engineer. Mahesh got posted to his district. He saw that his village lacked the basic infrastructure and because of the funds, the village could hardly progress. Mahesh along with villagers approached the administration and requested the roads and bridges on the river. Soon, the Govt. sanctioned a bridge and a road to the village. Mahesh being the engineer was made the engineer of the construction work. Road and bridge was constructed, which brought prosperity to the village. Village became a modern village.
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Line-wise Interpretation of the Above Story by the Psychologist
- Mahesh hailed from a remote village area – The first requirement of the TAT is the Hero identification and not the introduction. Here, the Hero identification is not complete. Another point here is,you should name the village, district, state etc.
- He was a hardworking and sincere student – Please note that, no unwanted details, impression management is required and even no adjectives like hard-working, sincere, national-champion, honest, brave etc. These qualities should be revealed through your action and through your problem solving behaviour.
- He always thought about the development of his village – Was there no one in the village to think about the development except him? For this, the Hero in the background should not necessarily be from an engineering background; rather he should be have been introduced as a social worker.
- Mahesh completed his studies and became an engineer – Which studies did Mahesh complete, whether B. Tech in Civil, Mechanical, Electrical etc and from where? Further, there was no one to see the progress of his village except him and that too, when he became an engineer. And before becoming an engineer, did he not see whether the village was lacking progress because of fund?
- Mahesh got posted to his Dist. He saw that his village lacked the basic infrastructure and because of the funds, the village could hardly progress – Again, Mahesh means the Hero is doing according to his wish by getting him posted to his own Dist and witnessing that the village lacked the basic infrastructure and due to the shortage of the funds, the village could not progress. So, what he is doing is writing the story as he wants. This kind of story is evaluated as Self-Generated Response. This means, you generate a response as per your wish and as per your convenience. See Mr. Mahesh is doing whatever he wants and the story is running according to his wish, hence termed as Wishful-Thinking.
- Mahesh along with his villagers approached the administration and requested the roads and bridges on the river. Soon, the Govt. sanctioned a bridge and a road to the village – Here, it means that getting the funds sanctioned was pre- determined, that the fund has to be sanctioned without hurdle or problem. Nothing comes ever so easy in life. Mahesh being the engineer, was made the engineer of the construction work – Again, here the story is being designed to suit the Hero and as he wants to perform.
- Road and bridge was constructed, which brought prosperity to the village. Village became a modern village – Again, here the story reveals a small effort and big achievement, which is not possible in practical life.
The Practical Interpretation of the Story with Context to Subjective Interpretation and Psychological Interpretation
The above interpretation by the Psyche officer was a subjective one. Now, we will see the psychological and actual interpretation which can make and break the story and may not allow the story to become psychologically desired one:
Please see, in the above story the person has not perceived the situation and seen of the situation properly and has not used/applied his imagination to observe that, what this particular situation demands:
- There is no similarity between the situation and the point of start. Now, the situation of the scene is that a person being alone is going ahead while facing the cyclone and heavy rain, that too in the night.
- The aspirant has not forced his intellectual imagination to imagine that, what this particular situation demands and what the aspirant has perceived or has written in the story – is it logical? What the Aspirant has Perceived and Written?
- The aspirant has perceived that a remote village has not progresses and no one has thought ever to do so except him, whereas the demand of the situation is something else.
- What he is expected to perceive to make his story imaginative and acceptable? The aspirant has perceived a Long-term goal, where as the demand of the situation is to perceive Short-term goal. The requirement of the Armed Forces is ‘Leader of Crisis-Problem Solver’ and not a ‘Manager-Crisis Preventer’.
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village all the fields were got damaged and villager were lost their source of income. rohit started to teach them the handmade disgning on the handloom
and started to sail it in the city’s shopes on whole sail rate. when the season of
cropes came again villager started to do work in their villages
as well as contineued to work in the hand loom designing also.
in this way rohit sort out the problem from his village
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Amit,a 22 year old young graduate was returning from his freind house.It was late night and suddenly it started raining.So he decided to take shelter for some time.Suddenly he saw a car rushed toward a tree a crashed against it.He immediately ran towards the card.There ware a couple and a small kid inside the car.they were injured badly.He shouted for help and ran towards nearby residents from where he called for an ambulence and got some first aid and people came for their help.Due to his effort three lifes were saved.
manik lives in remote area of patyal in gorha district of MP, he was a farmer and makes his livelihood from farming, that was usual day of his farming, all fellow farmers had reaped their crops and went home, he was working till late evening as usual when he saw huge storm coming towards their village, immediately he understood the criticality of situation and went village,described the situation to all his fellows, returned to farm, collected their reap, safeguarded under grainery , thus later when storm came their was not much harm to their crops. Thus all of them can enjoy their reap then.
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Ajay a 21 year old guy.studying in don bosco college of enggenering and persuing b.tech degree in ETC
while coming from a exam which was held in college he was feeling very upset because of his exam which didn’t go well.on his way home he ran into a village named semapuri which was badly hitted by storm and thunder.he thought of taking a shelter and he tooked shelter in a villager’s home where he saw the villager was busy throwing water outside the house which was geeting accumulated inside.so he thought of helping them so that he deviate his mind from his upset feeling and he helped the villager and they were able to throw all the water out of his home.he stayed there for a night because the whether was to extereme and next morning with a cool mind he started his journey to go back home.
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Swapnil was coming to his home and suddenly heavy rain with cyclone got started and damaged the bridge of a river which connects his society to city, so he decided to inform municipal corporation of city asap to avoid major accident. so he rushed to their office and told about the outrage, they took a quick action and provided the tentative support to the bridge and later fixed it permanently.
Sir, I request you to assess my WAT and some of my TAT responses to improve and to analyse myself.
WAT
Book- Reading Books increases Knowledge.
Straight- Walk in a straight path.
Arguments- Convince the opponent by strong, Valid and Polite arguments.
Threat- Overcome threat by calm and cool approach.
Judge- 360 degree analysis is important for judging.
Change- Be flexible to work in all the areas.
Impossible- Confidence and Hardwork makes everything possible.
Help- Extend your helping hands to all.
Knowledge- Share the Knowledge with other people.
Solve- Solve the problem by splitting it into parts.
Punctual- Punctuality holds the key in attaining a good responsibility.
Tact- A leader has good tactics to take his team towards the target.
Mother- Mother’s Love is unmatchable.
Travel- Learn a lot while travelling by meeting various people.
Sacrifice- Sacrifice the life for the motherland.
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Ashutosh was doing bcom hnrs and ALSO had joined Ncc , it was holiday AND he was COMING FROM HIS RELATIVES HOUSE ,IT WAS A DARK ND HE WAS ALL ALONE , SUDDENLY HE LISTEN SOME NOISE FROM A NEARBY WHERE HE WAS PASSING THROUGH ,FIRST HE IGNORED IT BUT THEN HIS HEART DIDNT ALLOWED HIM TO WENT OFF AND HE STOPED TO FIND OUT D SITUATION , HE SAW AN UNCONCIOUS YOUNG BOY , MERELY OF 7 TO 8 AGE BITTED BY D SNAKE . AS THERE WAS NO TIME TO TAKE TO HIM HOSTPITAL AS TREATMENT SHOULD BE GIVEN TO HIM IMMIDIETELY .ASHUTOSH RECALLED A TRAINING WHICH WAS GIVEN TO HIM DURING NCC CAMP IN HEALTH N HYGIENE SESSION AND APPLIED IT AFTER SOMETIME BOY WAS CONSIOUS AND WAS BETTER,THEN ASHOTOSH TOOK HIM TO D HOSPITAL AND REFER HIM TO D DOCTOR .NOW BOY WAS SAFE AND DOCTOR ALSO APPRAISED ASHUTOSH .
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Ramesh was a graduate student and belongs to a village. One day when he was returning from his college he felt some smell coming out from the field. He went towards the smell and saw a neil gaay was badly injured. Blood was coming out from its leg. ramesh immediately went to his village and called village veteran doctor and some of his freinds. He immediately reached back to the spot with doctor and his friends. He also took some food and water for niel gaay. Doctor treated the niel guy gave her injection and bandaged her leg. Ramesh gave her food and water and with the help of his friend he took her in his home. He care her till she became fully healthy and then leave her in jungle.
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Rahim was a 21 years old Electrical engineering graduate.He was returning from his friends house in the adjacent village when the weather got very rough.Hence he took shelter in a small bus stand and waited for the weather to clear out. It was then that he noticed a girl around 15-16 years old in the rain holding on to a cow and unable to handle it in the rain. so Rahim then ran to her,took hold of the cow and guided her to the bus stand and waited there for the rain to stop.
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picture description:-two men are sitting on a tree in a jungle.
Story:-
There was a big problem in the forest that the evils were came in the forest in the late hours of the evening to cut the trees. Ram was a newly appointed forest officer.so one day he decided to hide himself on the tree with his guard.when the evils came in the evening to cut the trees he caught him with the help of his guard and admitted the case against them.In this way he eradicate the problem of deforestation and maintained it very well.
hi naveen
In my opinion you have to write something more about the characters.
you must introduce the main character more withhis full details such as his age,mood,character and so on.
After that you should mention the situation and how he doing.
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Ranjeet with his family are working in their fields.it’s very hot day of june month.The hot waves are flowing.Satish was passing from the non metal road near to their fields and was struggling in the hot weather.Satish came to them for some relief from the hard weather.ranjeet gives him water and asked him where is he going?Satish says he comes to meet his relative in the next village.As the next village was arond 4-kilometers away from there,Ranjeet picked him on his bicycle and dropped him to that village and come back to his fields.
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Rahul is an Garduate and working in Delhi metro at Dehli. he took a leave to visit his native at rampur village at UP in the month of Aug. the whether was cloudy. Getting down from the bus He did not found any Auto, he decided to proceeded towards his house by walk along with bag. whether was getting Bad to worst due to Rain & thunderstorm. he took shelter under a community hall where few villager were already present. Suddenly heard a banging sound and saw a Jeep hit the tree due to Slippery and turning road. Every one watching the same, Rahul took initiative and convinced others to give helping hand to take out casualty. They were two one was unconscious and bleeding. He has given CPR as first Aid and tied his Hanky to his bleeding Hand. He decided to bring Ambulance from Nearby Hospital as he suspected for Fracture. He ran towards hospt. and convinced the team of doctors to visit the place. One doctor in ambulance came to the site, the doctor inspected and tod him that the patient may be required to undergo Surgery and Blood is required. He again went to hospital and donated his blood as standby. he called up on phone to his house and Patients house and brief them about the situation. The doctor thanks rahul for saving ones life.
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Anirudh was newly posted forest officer at Udhampur.He xame to know that some illegal smuggling of trees and sandalwood is going on in the area. anirudh informed the higher authorities about the incident, requested them to provide sophisticated weapons,Fast moving vehicles, Wireless radio sets.He also cultivated sources within the place,ask police to help him. He also ordered numbering of trees and after getting all the required things, he with the help of police ambushed the smugglers and catched them. In the future, the cases of the smuggling was almost none. He congratulated his team and thanked police for cooperation. He was happy with the result.
Rahul is civil engineer. He works in a village of Jaisalmer district of Rajasthan. There is lack of water. One day he was going to his quater from the site and there was a heavy rain and he saw that there were lots of wastage of water. So, he decided to teach villagers about rain water harvesting. So, he made a good plan for rain water harvesting in the village. He implemented that plan successfully with the help of the villagers. That system vanished the water related problems of that village.
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Aman was an IT professional from Dhule and was working in TCS at Pune. His native place was remote and distant from nearby towns. Due to remote location and lack of literacy his native place was quite undeveloped.
He had the sense of responsibility towards his native place. Whenever he gets time like vacation or weekends; he comes to his village and try to do some work for his people.
Once doing same in Monsoon time, he called a meeting of villagers and Gram Sudhar Adhikaris in the temple of village for improved irrigation and water conservation. It helped a lot to people and taught them how to save water.
After meeting he was returning to his home but in midway he got stuck by heavy rainfall. He ran to nearby tree for shelter. The rain was too heavy. He waited too long for rain to stop. After some time suddenly he heard a noise of tree falling on a house. He rushed towards the spot and tried to help the people stuck under the tree. He called other villagers and the moved the tree within few minutes. Due to his instant response he managed to reduce any casualties.
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Prashant was a young graduate. he was resident of chitoor village in andhara Pradesh. The area lacked in water resource. one day there was a heavey rain, when Prashant was on he way back home after giving tution. so he got an idea to store rain water. As he reached home he arranged a pipe to draw roof water in drums and buckets. After seen the idea he and his father made a proper rain water storage system.
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Plz rate my story. Is it good or it needs improvement.
Arun was a final year student of Civil Engg from Ksr coll, Tamilnadu. He was returning to his home on college vacation. It took him late night to come to his native. He get down from the bus and started walking towards his home which was about 2 km. It started to blow strong winds and it started to drizzle. When he moved on, it rained heavily. so he took his umbrella and walked towards home. On his way he saw a small boy, struggling to remove rain water from his house. He went to help the small boy. Arun saw the water entering into the house by the broken window. Arun sweeped out all water. Then he took the big wooden plate nearby and placed over the open place and he fixed it using nails. Then the water was prevented from entering into the house. Then the small boy thanked Arun. Then Arun made a good arrangement for the boy to sleep and He began his walk towards his home.
Arun was a final year student of Civil Engg from Ksr coll, Tamilnadu. He was returning to his home on college vacation. It took him late night to come to his native. He get down from the bus and started walking towards his home which was about 2 km. It started to blow strong winds and it started to drizzle. When he moved on, it rained heavily. so he took his umbrella and walked towards home. On his way he saw a small boy, struggling to remove rain water from his house. He went to help the small boy. Arun saw the water entering into the house by the broken window. Arun sweeped out all water. Then he took the big wooden plate nearby and placed over the open place and he fixed it using nails. Then the water was prevented from entering into the house. Then the small boy thanked Arun. Then Arun made a good arrangement for the boy to sleep and He began his walk towards his home.
Rajat who was returning from his days work whose office is in the town which is quite a long from his village where he stays. While returning the clouds shuttered and it started to rain heavy even before he could search for a shade where he can stop. However he found a abondoned shed as shelter where he stopped for rain. There he noticed that there were couple of new born puppies which was shiverin from cold unattended by its mother dog and one of them’s condition was too worse. As soon as he saw it suffering from cold he gave some warmth and took it home once the rain was stopped and give the first aid to it. Sir rate this one!! Tried something new!
Dinesh who was BA student living in village haibatpur.It was his daily evening routine to go to his farms and to help his dad.One evening his dad was out of town and weather conditions got bad heavy winds were blowing and they have to cover there harvested crop.He reached there on time and covered his crop and saved it from heavy rain.After 2 days when weather conditions got normal they took thr crop to grain market and sold it for good prices.
Anil was very poor student.his father was carpenter. he has two brother and one sister. his desire was to made an ias officer. his father worked very hard and also provide to good education to his children up to his mark. he knew that his father was very laborious, and also getting very less money, it is not possible for our education.So,he also took tutions classes to 12th standard student for earning money to complete his study and also our brother and sister.After completed his studies he worked very hard and made himself for ias officer. with his sustain efforts, he crossed all the hurdles in way to his aim. he appeared at upsc exam..finally he got through upsc exam and made an ias officer as per his desire. After some time, the day has been changed to his family. his friend and parents greeted to him success for achieved his goal. He was satisfied with our performance.now, Anil is a collector of korba distt(chhattisgarh)….
ram who is a doing his last year b com but lives in little bit away from city . his father his a heart patient and medicine is finished at home but his father immediately need it. so he ran and went to city medical shop but while coming back a huge cyclone appear but he didn’t stop because his father needs medicine. so he covered his eyes by his arm and sometimes he run fast sometimes he walk fast and reached to his house and given the medicine to his father. and felt relaxed because his father is ok now
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PICTURE DESCRIPTION: a woman wearing a saree she is crying and is holding a small child who is wiping her tears. No other surroundings have been shown.
Story:
Raj was a small kid of 6 yrs when he became disabled due to polio attack, his mother upon looking his condition used to pick him up and cry for hours as she thought it is because of her ignorance about polio drops that her son has to suffer; he always used to wipe her tears saying that “Dont cry mom walking is not everything”. In years to come he studied very hard and as a result of his hard work he became a doctor with an ambition to finish of Polio from the society. He worked day and night in his lab and developed a vaccine that could be given to a child upon his birth which will save him from every polio attack. His seniors congratulated him and the vaccine was approved by the health ministry for use and that day Raj was the happiest man on earth.
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Pankaj a scientist,once he was crossing a road suddenly rain has started,rain fall was so heavy, he decided to stay under a tree,after some time he saw a man.pankaj ask for help to him,after tht main is ready to help him becoz both are heading towards the same destination(Indian Centre of scientist).
pankaj ask him, what is the reason for which he is going indian center of scientist,man xplained him that he is a farmer and he has need of some scientist to improve the quality of fertilization,after hearing it pankaj told him about his profession and give him some instruction about cultivation he also promised to visit village rampur again with his team to explain each n everything about cultivation.
pankaj kept his promise and went to village rampur,because of his & A stranger to whom he was met in tht heavy rainfall everyone in village get benifit.
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Nicely written , just reduce much negative about the hero, keep the story little shorter.
Ramu was a very adamant and timid boy.He was an above average student and was also good in extracurricular activities.He was always mentioned as an example by all his teachers to his friends.All this had got onto him in a very negative aspect.He felt very superior to others and payed no heed to others words.He even started to disrespect his elders words.One evening on his way to his tuition,he was advised to carry umbrella as it looked overcast and even the final exams were nearing.He , as usual ignored her words.Later on his way home,it started to rain very heavily and it transformed son into a cyclone storm.Ramu dint have many options but to reach home as soon as posible as the rain jus got heavier.As a result Ramu fell very ill and subsequently missed his exams and had to repeat the term.This incident left Ramu very disappointed and heartbroken.But it also changed him for the better.It made him a better person and today Ramu is not only the best student of his school but is also a friend/son that everyone would love to have.Ramu never looked back at his old self after that day.
Ramu was a very adamant and timid boy.He was an above average student and was also good in extracurricular activities.He was always mentioned as an example by all his teachers to his friends.All this had got onto him in a very negative aspect.He felt very superior to others and payed no heed to others words.He even started to disrespect his elders words.One evening on his way to his tuition,he was advised to carry umbrella as it looked overcast and even the final exams were nearing.He , as usual ignored her words.Later on his way home,it started to rain very heavily and it transformed son into a cyclone storm.Ramu dint have many options but to reach home as soon as posible as the rain jus got heavier.As a result Ramu fell very ill and subsequently missed his exams and had to repeat the term.This incident left Ramu very disappointed and heartbroken.But it also changed him for the better.It made him a better person and today Ramu is not only the best student of his school but is also a friend/son that everyone would love to have.Ramu never looked back at his old self after that day.
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Nice story, your story is matching with the picture shown, keep it up, well written as well.
Rohan an Agricultural Engineer had come to visit his grand parents at their village Nawalgarh. One day while he was going to join his grandpa on the fields he observed smoke rising up in the air. The smoke came from outskirts of the village. He followed in that direction and found out that people burn there all household and other biomass waste. On seeing large quantity of biomass waste it pondered to him to meet the Sarpanch and inform him about the setting of biogas plant and various subsidies provided by the government for the same. He met the Sarpancha. Told him that this biomass could be converted into biogas which could be used for electricity and cooking gas for the village. The sarpanch along with Rohan met the officials and soon the biomass recycling project started.
Ben was a young SSb aspirant from a village called tirunelveli in tamilnadu. He went to his native place oneday to visit his family’s traditional farmlands. He had to take some of his townsmen with him because the they too wanted to accompany him. They wanted to walk all the way so they could enjoy the farms and orchids. They had taken only about ten minuted walk and rain started to pour in. It started with mild showers and turned out to be a downpour accompanied with thunderstorms and lightning. The townsmen were scared of the lightning but Ben wasn’t. He made then rest inside a motor room and started sprinting towrds the village center. He reacehd there quickly and got help from other men there. They took a rickshaw and got all the people safe back.. PLEASE RATE THIS SIR
Mahesh was a resident of Dantewada district in Chhattisisgarh.He was doing his graduation and always dreamed of joining armed forces and to serve the nation.But the naxal menace in the area is not only dampening the spirit of the mahesh,but also the common people,who want to lead a happy life.
CRPF camped in their village and were waiting to take out the local naxal commander and his batch mates as soon as possible,but the only difficulty is that they(naxals) roam as villagers and some times as soldiers and it is a difficult task to point out them from the innocent citizens.They(CRPF) rely on reliable information from the villagers and informers to identify the naxalites.
One day,when Mahesh was on his way to home,at around 18:00Hrs,he saw a group of strangers passing in to the dense forests and he realized that they were naxalites and he thought if he stayed at home,those naxalites would create havoc,and his only option is to inform the CRPF soldiers,who were camping in the deep forests of their village.Even though it was raining heavily and weather was not in favour of travelling,he dared to carry on with his task of informing the CRPF soldiers about the naxalites and went to the CRPF camp and informed them,which led the CRPF soldiers to ambush the naxals and a huge cache of ammunition was recovered.
Mahesh’s bravery was acknowledged by the villagers and they all realised that there is no harm in informing the CRPF about the naxals as it in turn will help them to lead a happy life.
Sir please Comment on my story……..
I was not able to concentrate on this story while reading , the very first annoying thing is that it is veryyy lengthy, so it reduces the interest of reading specially in TAT , please make a short and to the point.
@ admin: please indicate areas of improvement .
Nice story , you can tell at the starting only about the crop yielding,so that it will match with the problem came suddenly .
thank you sir…
rajeev is a son of an old farmer and is doing graduation in science. one day , while he was doing practical in the lab he observed that weather has turned out to be windy and stormy. he found that there are chances of heavy rain. so he decided to go back home and help out his father in harnessing wheat crop quickly. he took permission from his teacher, went to his village facing heavy winds and bad weather. he also arranged two more persons for labor-work. with more men working in the field, rajeev was able to harness the crop on time while also saving destruction of crops from the heavy wind and rain. rajeev came back home happily with his father after finishing the work .
Sir, the picture is of a soldier lying on the ground and firing a gun.
Story is a s follows
Capt Aryan was posted in ladak.Every morning he used to go for patrolling along the border area.One such day when he was walking , he saw a group of 4 armed men .He headed towards them discretely to get more information. Suddenly the men broke fire . Aryan immediately took cover behind a stone . He saw that his junior officer was injured.He rushed to the radio, informed the base command about the incident and their location,peeped through the stone and saw that the enemy was moving close to them . To divert their attention he crawled behind another stone and shot down 2 enemies .Suddenly a grenade exploded and Aryan was injured . He pretended to be dead ,and when the enemy came close ,he suddenly rose up and shot them down.Aryan then saw the Army chopper coming, waved to them and had a sigh of relief .
Nice story.
can u rate it plz….
Alex is a 3rd year Mech Eng. Student in VIT university. He has come to his home town for summer holidays and went to the farm along with his father who is a farmer and came to know that there has been frequent power cuts since it been summer. Also, he came to know taht the rainfall has not been even and the plantation was affected by the power cuts during the other seasons also. He noticed that the air flow at that place is very well. So he made an aim to make a low cost wind mill to power up the motor. He used the ceiling fan and altered it to make it work as a wind mill.
Ending of story was abrupt.
Kamal blong to a small city near the Kangra district and was studying in MCA final year one day while going to his area he saw that a speeding car hit a man who was crossing a road he immediately note down the car number and saw a passing vehicle and took a lift to admit him to hospital after admitting him he was sad with the traffic rules of the police and casual behavior of the police on duty after reaching his area he report to the representative of his village and went to police station to report against such careless duty by traffic police as that speeding car driver was driving after consuming liquor and latter he visit hospital and then was very happy to know that that man is out of danger
….sir i would like to know that is it good to have two goals in one story like i did also he admit him to hospital and simultaneously he along with city representative like sarpanch is reporting at police station ????? is this story good please rate my story sir
Yes you can, very nice story Amit.
shashank was engineering student.After his graduation,he planned to go for the IAS .
he started work hard for that .he joined good coaching institute.he attended class with full dedication,even in bad weather, he went for coaching regularly.he took enough time for his self study.he took on proper diet.he read interviewes of previous toppers,which motivated him .finally his hardwork paid.he selected in ias with top rank
Gaurav one suggestion,I know you are not a writer but in SSB you have to write a story with interest . So think , frame and write a story. A good story indeed.
SIR,CAN YOU ELABORATE PLEASE…I DID NOT GET YOUR POINT PLS
What ever you have written above shows that you were less interested while writing it.
Sir,Could you plz examine the following story on the following described picture
The picture is of a farmer in a field and a young boy of about 25 yrs talking to him
The story is as follows:
Arjun was working in a Bio fertilizer manufacturing company.He had made a new brand of fertilizers, taking the type of the soil and the affordability of the poor farmers into consideration.So he went to an agricultural village to campaign his product for the betterment of farmers.He spoke to the Sarpanch ,told him about the product and seeked his permission to talk to the farmers.He then gathered all the farmers in the field ,Explained them about the benefits of this product, and its reduced cost.Initially the farmers did not understand and believe Arjun .But Arjun convinced them by giving them a Demonstration and by Showing them the government certificate in the regional language.He also provided free samples to the farmers for trial purpose and explained to them how to use it and, about the right quantity to be used for different crops.The farmers agreed to try his product.After about a month the productivity of the crops increased considerably , and Arjun received more orders.The farmers as well as Arjun was very happy with the success of his new product.
Aditya for the picture you have mentioned , I find your story excellent . This picture is common in many SSB boards.
sir plz tell hwz is my story:-
Pradeep was a B.A graduate hailing from a small village of Uttar pradesh.His father was sarpanch of the village.Ramesh was preparing for IAS and every month in the starting weeks he used to go to magazine shop to buy Pratiyogita darpan as dere was limited stocks.It was monsoon season,he went to take the book on monday and wen he was on his way his father called him and told him about sum women along wid there small babies had cum to seek help becz dere babies didnt take the polio drops on sunday becz of heavy rain.His father instructed him to go to d doctor and report him about the situation.He went dere but the shop was fully packed with patients,he requested the assistant to report the problem to doctor.The doc as he was busy culdnt be able to go to his village so he juz instructed him about how to give polio drops.He tuk d small bottles and walked towars his village and gave the drops to the babies.
plzzzz sir … waiting 4 reply…!!!
Very Nice .
shashank was college student.he wanted to become an ias officer.to fulfil his desire .he took coaching from a institute.he worked hard for that.he went his coaching regulary,even in bad weather(rain,cyclone).he eat proper diet.he gave enough time to his self study.he kept motivating himself by reading the interview of toppers.finally he selected in ias exam with top rank
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sir i m 3 times conference out if i write all 12 stories like that will they work for me in pshycology test.
You can always improve and learn from past mistakes.
Sir Please assess my story now
Shelter for whose animal ?? For stray animals no one provides shelter .
Rohan live in bundi village and was here for his summer vacation. He was doing his bachelor degree in environmental science from Delhi uni. When he was coming from a friends party suddenly it started raining due to bad weather conditions. Rohan took shelter in the nearby house.But it was very painful for him to see the the animals shivering in the cold. Next day he try to sought out this problem and met with the village authorities and gave the proposal for the shelter facilities for the animals also so that they could also led a safe and healthy life an which also helps in protecting our environment. Rohan proposal was liked by all and it was passed in a short span of time and the authorities also praise rohan for his concern for nature and village.
sir plz rate my story.
Very nice and practical approach shown, keep it up.
Nice story but I have read the quite similar story before 🙂
I have read this before, try to write your own.
ravi was a college student living in a village. one day while coming from the college huge rainfall started with heavy thunderstorm.he took shelter under atree with other people standing there.suddenly a jeep overturned while turning due to slippery mud as the road was not concrete made.ravi quickly rushed toward the spot and overturned the jeep with the help of other people.he took out the driver and tied his handkerchief to his hand as blood was flowing out of it.he along with two more persons put him in the jeep and took him to nearby hospital and informed his relatives,after their arrival ravi went to his home.next day he visited again to hospital and found that driver condition was improved.
Rahul and his friends were coming from a late night party. They were in a good mood.Suddenly the climate becomes bad and huge rain started ….they all ran to take shelter in a community center…Suddenly rahul’s saw the slum dwellers situation they and there kids were suffering from cold as due to bad climate and heavy rain…Rahul and his friend were deeply hurted by seeing this situation…Rahul took a decision to change it and improve the management of the city and social problems(basic necessities) of the poor people. Rahul immediately after finishing his graduation prepared hardly to get selected for civil services…he got selected in his very early attempt with a good rank and luckily got his city bhopal as his first posting..Then thinking about the change to that he wanted to see in the society on the very next day he met all the politicians with some good schemes and projects that he wanted to implement for the benefit of the poor people..Soon it got the sanction of the government and all the schemes were implemented in a very nicely manner rahul being the in charge of the works…In his 1 year work only he changed the life styles of the people..There were community centers for the poor, educational institutions and the various disaster management mechanisms were also taken into account…There were also kept maximum attention on the quality life of the people i.e food water cloth and shelter….Soon he saw the changes and was very much happy when he full filled his aim…Rahul got the certificate of appreciation and a award by the president of india for his excellent work in transforming people life and promotion also as the DGP of his state..
Sir Please rate my story
Have you gone through this post?? You did the same mistakes mentioned above.
Sir pls asses my story.
Mahesh from Rampur village dist Khargon in Madhya pradesh this is a rural area earlier there was not basic basic things like drinking water, schools, primary hospital etc but now developed as by hard working of mahesh and their villagers.one day mahesh collect his villagers and discus about the bad condition of their village and present an idea go to collector office and describe these to collector. villagers accept the mahesh’s idea and mahesh and their villagers go to the collector office khargon and describe all their problem to collector, collector send this issue to chief minister mr. Shivraj singh chouhan then mr. chohan provide the basic things to the rampur and appreciate mahesh and all villagers for their responsive behavior.inspire by this and make plans for all these type of village.
Nice story , but improve the framing and avoid grammatical mistakes .
Harshit was a passionate and wise boy of class 12. After giving his board exams he decided to went to his grandfather village because of lush green mountains near his village where he used to play during his childhood.
At the evening of his arrival at village whan he was going to those mountains he was stopped by the dirty sand wind coming on his way from mountains. Later he found those green lush mounains as brown big rocks.
Later he found at his home that it was the done of mining companies which left them with brown colour after their work. Next day he gathered his whole village in panchayat and motivate them to use methods like tree plantation , water harvestation etc to bring back green to mountains . Villagers nodded to his ideas and practice his methods.
Yet it was not like a fast fruit bearing tree but he was happy after 10 years when he came back to village .
Harshit was a passionate and wise boy of class 12. After giving his board exams he decided to went to his grandfather village because of lush green mountains near his village where he used to play during his childhood.
At the evening of his arrival at village whan he was going to those mountains he was stopped by the dirty sand wind coming on his way from mountains. Later he found those green lush mounains as brown big rocks.
Later he found at his home that it was the done of mining companies which left them with brown colour after their work. Next day he gathered his whole village in panchayat and motivate them to use methods like tree plantation , water harvestation etc to bring back green to mountains . Villagers nodded to his ideas and practice his methods.
Yet it was not like a fast fruit bearing tree but he was happy after 10 years when he came back to village .
Sir admin , pls rate my story.
Nice Story .
Dhruv was a civil engineer . He was working on a project which was in the outskirts of the city . One day he had arranged an important meeting with the client in the evening to decide about the contract validity.After having his tea in the evening he headed towards the site for the meeting . Suddenly the wind started blowing very fast .There were showers and soon the climate took a form of a storm. Dhruv immediately took shelter under a tree. He waited sometimes for the storm to calm down, but even after 30 min of waiting the storm was still the same. So Druv started walking through the storm .In order to cope up for the loss of time he took a shorter path to his site .As he was he saw that the path was covered with water. He walked through the water and soon reached the site just 10 min before the meeting . He immediately cleaned himself and went in the office for the meeting.
Civil Engineers gets good vehicles for such work.
Can improve it more, it is not showing much qualities of yours.
Mahesh was a 30 year old man working as a chemist.One day when he was returning from his duty,he founded that there is a stormy and raining heavily.So he took shelter under a cemented house which is in the way.At the same time he heard a voice of a women asking for help.Her 5 year old son was injured.He took him in his lap and went to the hospital without worrying about whether.Soon the pain was under controlled. He thanked doctor and went his home happily.
Now you are improving, but still lot of improvement is required , sentence formation need to be improved more . Keep it up.
thanks @admin sir… i will try for that
@admin kindly rate our stories also
Both stories are excellent, short and to the point. Keep it up
thanks a lot…boosts my confidence…..
@admin plese rate my story also,and give ur suggestion to improve it.i am a fresher and have a ssb at this 22 april,,
Rahul is a 22 year young boy pursuing his b.s.c form annamalai university,tamilnadu.one day when he was returning to his own village he found that the whether was very stormy and a tsunami like condition is there.so he manage somehow himself to reach his village,and spread the news of bad whether in all villagers,and told them to go to a safe place as early as possible.he made a telephone call to the rescue team to the near town for helping them in this situation.soon a team reached the village and took them to a cemented house which is a panchayat bhawan of a near village,and thus he save all the villagers by this bad whether.
Alok
Lot of spelling mistakes, bad framing indeed.
story has no strong points.
Hero just assumed a bad weather and made others in panic, he is not a weather expert.
Even a bad weather can be seen by others also, kindly look above you will find many good stories.
all the best for your SSB interview.
thanks a lot sir for giving such suggestions
Manoj,35 yr old worked at weather forecast deptt in village Gazipur near coastal plane . One day he returned from office found that storming & thundering suddenly occurred in weather . He moved fast and informed all the villagers that the sign of bad weather was not good , we have to leave as soon as possible to save our life . Because of his working experience he could predict the natural disaster and saved life.
@ admin plz rate my story
@ admin
in my screening the pic shown was (blurred) a man who was half bend and doing
something and my story was-
vijay who was a civil engg returned back to his village after a long time there he saw that people of his were unemployed so he took the aim to employ them by setting up a cottage industry for this he first met the village sarpanch and discussed the plan with him for which he agreed then the both went to the block development officer and presented his idea and bdo readlly agreed to provide funds to him soon within 6 month the cottage industry was setup and it gave employment to many villagers by this his village prospered and by helping the villagers he was happy and satisfied.
Rahul was a social worker who was one among the committee member in his village.It was the time of winter where the heavy rains and cyclones hit the village,which affected many crops and fields,the village has not sufficient funds from the government to keep the land safe.Rahul organised a committee in which he took ideas from his team memembers in how to save this lands got to a conclusion and went to the collector office took appoinment, and explained the complete scenario of the village,he convinced the collector to forward the request to the goverment and got the funds after many efforts.Finally the villagers got funds to make the crops grown properlly.
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hey admin this is my first story….please rate it..:)
Ankit was a eng student,on his vacations he went to his village.on one night his father ask him to go to the field and monitor the labour who was plaughing the field. ankit was on his way to field suddenly it was thundershower starting..but it coudnt stop ankit.he reached there and he saw a the labor was doing rest,seeing it ankit makes their morale high for plaughing the field.he brush up them and tended them to make a new start.labour plaugh the field in whole night with a enthusiasm.
@admin…….plzz rate m story
raman was teacher in his village . it was rainy season and because of that the roof of the school was damaged . he called all the students and asked their consent on what to do . they decided that they will put one day into repairing the roof . students got khurpi, wter and concrete and formed the mixture . some student requested their father who was in this profession . all students helped each other and they repaired the building till evening and protected the part by draping with cloth . hence all students learnt many things on that day .
sunil was an officer in disaster management office . he was given the duty to aware the people in the nearby about flood and thunderstorm . he along with his team went to village . they old people to be ready whenever such situation occured , to keep food , cloth in advance . they also demonstrated on how to make a boat with the help of bamboo. ey told people to stay together & immediately call for gov. help . they also selected some volunteer from village and gave some training . hence villagers were happy to get knowledge .
please corrrect my story admin
nagmani was on a night shift in his company . during night while returning there his bike was stuck and there was nothing in the road . so nagmani called his friend . his friend came , kept the bike safely in the company premises and drop nagmani to home . nagmani thanked his friend for disturbing in night . next day he went early to office , repaired his bike and contined the job
hii admin
at the end of his final term at PANTNAGAR UNIVERSITY,for the compleation of his project ‘AGRICULTURE IN INDIA’,He visited the near by village, during his visit he came to know that the area was heaving a great potential of production,but due to the less awareness of the people about the gov policies and new methods of cropping they lacked. he collected the people allready available over there for developement and with his contienous efforts he was able to spread awareness in the vast area of the village . ultimatelly his project was implemented in practical gradually production started rising.
@Admin please rate both of my stories
Sambodh was a teacher of a primary school in lohjang area of Uttrakhand. One day while coming from school, there was a huge thunderstorm and heavy rain.All the roads were blocked. He took shelter under a tree.After some time he got a phone call from one of the parents of his students that their son has still not reached home. Despite the thunderstorm he went back to the school. But he didnt find anyone there. He again left from the school and finally found the boy stuck under a tree. He took him to hospital for first aid and later took him to his home.
Karan was a college student living in Pulwama area of J&K. One day while coming from college, there was heavy downpour.He took shelter under a chinar tree.There he observed a lady and her daughter; both injured. The daughter was quite critical and in desperate need of treatment. Karan took both of them to a nearby house.Then he left immediately to call the doctor. But the doctor was reluctant to come with him. He persuaded him and brought him along.The girl survived and thanked Karan for his help.
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feedback@admin….wht r weak points??…what i need to add
sahil is a student of b.sc 3rd year….one day when he was returning frm a seminar…..it started raining heavly …….so to protect himself he took the shelter of a old hut….
after few minutes he heard a voice of a woman coming frm a nearest home who was crying fr help…he went in the direction of her voice .he saw a pregnant woman ,who was helpless in pain n asking fr help.he quickly called nearest medicare center fr ambulance and gathered some people for help.in the ambulance he took lady to medicare center and admitted her.after few hours she was cured safely and her delivery was successful 🙂
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hey admin can u please comment on my story
In the given picture,the central character Prateek along with his NGO team is trying to save the lives of his village people in the flood & cyclone affected areas of his hometown Darbhanga,Bihar.His NGO team provided food & shelter to the effected areas of his village.In the rescue operation carried out by his team they saved around thousand lives in the village.
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anil was a young farmer. he owned a piece of land for rice and wheat farming. But during the rainy seasons, due to the sudden heavy rains and thunders his lost his land and also his seeds. So he with the other affected villagers approached to the district collector and asked for the rehabilitation and seeds. The management gave them seeds and he started farming again. Afterwards, he got an good yield and sold it in market. From the money he got improved his financial conditions and repayed the lones taken from management.
Dear Admin,
First of all thank you very much for such a useful page.
I went to SSB this October in TGC-114 entry and I was conference out. I feel my major fault was on GTO side and I am working on it. But somewhere, psych do play a bit role and we are not even aware of it.
This time I saw 2 pictures out of 11 which were depicting same theme. I wrote story almost similar, but I changed name, place and other details. Was it correct or not?
Second thing, in WAT I have few problems. Like can we make individualistic approach, like, if word is drink, then can we make sentence like, “He considers drinking alcohol is injurious to health.” I am totally messed up in WAT. Can you please give me few tips on that.
Sir, please help me. My next SSB for TGC-115 is in April. I want to clear it anyhow. Awaiting for your valuable comments.
Regards,
Anurag Kumar
Ram is 20 year old from Tarapur village near Bhavnagar City in Gujarat state.He was studying in electrical engineering at Bhavanagar University as well he was NCC Cadet. Once he wondering in village he knew that the child of Sahid Subedar Veer Bhan caught in high fever with cold. He was decided to help them, but there was no transportation is available at night. He set his mind to go by run to the nearest city but unforunatly the climate was getting wurst but he put is best effort as he can. Finally within half an hour he reached to city and came with the doctor in medical vehicle and the child is saved.After a few years he was selected as a officer in Indian Army.
@Ajay There is no rating actually , he will just bring out some qualities of your from your stories.
thanks a lot sir…
but please tell where the psycologist will rate this story out of 10?
@ajay good one
sir please analyze my story and tell me the good or bad about it………
David who is a doctor was returning home from his clinic at 10pm.On his way back home he was caught in a storm.As his car is moving slowly along the road side he saw a hand asking for help from the roadside trees.he stopped his car and went to the trees and found a man who was hit by a speeding vehical and was hurt badly.he carried the man to the road,helped him into the car ,gave him first aid and drove the car to the nearest hospital with emergency fecilities.got him admitted,gave his identity at the records and went to home.
@Suraj , Abhi , vnambirajan
Good stories, there is no need of headline .
post some other pictures. So that we can get more insight.
@ Admin and experts please do rate my story.
Whether a heading/title is to be given for the story….?
Ravi who is doing his Bachelor in Science is on the way to his home from his college. He knows the weather is getting rough and he has to go home early but it was too late. It get darkened and started to rain started heavily.While in a hurry to go home Ravi saw some on screaming for help. When he searched, he saw a huge tree fallen and a person is under the tree. Ravi immediately rushed to rescue the person.He helped the person to get rid of the mishap.And then Ravi took the person to nearby hospital for treatment.
ADMIN SIR PLEASE COMMENT ON THE STORY
Ramesh is a young MBBS graduate who has completed his course recently.As a part of work experience he was posted to a remote village to treat patients.
He is enjoying his work and taking care of patients very nicely.He is a person with smiling face all the time which made patients to forget about their sickness partially.One day he got an emergency call from nearby village.He started on his motor byke but unfortunately he has to face a thunder storm besides this it was heavily down pouring which stopped his byke to move forward.But he was determinant to attend the patient .He proceeded with a ray of hope that storm can calm down .His wish was fulfilled and he moved swiftly and attended his patient and saved his life.
sir iwrote story on folowing seen:
atree or heihted structure from where a person was taking aim from his rifle
below there twoo three person very dizzy. and enviroment was like forest.
my story goes like this:
karan is a captain in army and has been posted in arunanchal pradesh near
border area to have eye on intruders.one day he was on duty ,he saw some kind intruson
at a distance.he thought it write to inform his commander first.after informing he
took out his binoculars and noted down their locations,amunition centers,key points
in his mind.after that he returned to his base camp.with coperation of his team members he
made graphical chart in his mind about the details he noted down earlier.then they attacked
their and conquer them and collected the amunition.
sir plaese rate this story with details..???
@admin
i cn only say 1 wrd thanx ….sr fr Ur valUable commEnt on my story.althogh its AARAV not ALOK .:)
so sir how to correct it…?
what kind of sentences arer to be made..?
i have allready read your post related to word association test but iam not able to understand the idea…?
sir please…………………help…
afraid-torch shows the way in dark
hate-good understanding nvr create hate
girl-are also best friends
leader-makes the objecctive clear to his men
desire-gives strong will to succeed
ignore-the worries,karma is important
essential-to knw the pros and cons of problem
end-result is either success r future
valid-reasons are considered
vague-discussion clear the vague ideas
virtue-matters not caste
urge-to learn and improve
talk-less at work
tact-to defend
team-give different ideas to come to solution
sorrow-shared with friends to eradicate
success-comes with practice and regularity
study-with attention
truthful-in approach
serious-in the work
swim-ropes can save drowning man in pond
rescue-reliefs the victim
reduce-ice packs reduces the swelling
revenge-solve with talks
rain-eliminates the heat
responsible-for failures
question-clear doubts
quick-actions in rescue
participate-boost the confidence
popular-jean martinet was the popular french drillmaster
practical-enhances knowledge
sir plz check my reponse.
@Suraj
Not good sentences , most of them are facts like “brave soilders needded in country” what qualities your are showing in this sentence ??
“I am afraid of snake” is the snake only thing you afraid of ?? do you think it shows some qualities of yours ?
sex: sex needed for reproduction A facts 8th grade student knows about it .
girl: i want to have a girlfriend = Neutral thought.
sir iam making some sentences for words below
team: teamspirit wins match
coward:coward has no place in army
defeat: we play to win not to defeat anyone
brave:brave soilders needded in country
girl: i want to have a girlfriend.
afraid: courage removes fear, iam afraid of snake
fail: i failed in maths but passed next time with efforts
sex: sex needed for reproduction
leader:leadear loves hi followers
wok:working on self improves us
sir please give views on above sentences
and if something is wrong please tell what is wrong and how to correct it please sir………..
@Sandy
There will be 11 pictures so you can write a long term goal story in one picture it wont change anything but in other pictures try to show something practical and short term because future is uncertain.
@Suraj
Yes philosophy and sayings are not your thoughts , write your thoughts and it will look original , also it will shows your qualities .
@Suraj
Check a post regarding SRT in this blog.
@Rajat
Good story
@Kaprykon
It should not be visible and create and disturbance when someone sees you… guess you understand what I mean, not on face or neck(visible) and is it permanent ?
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i have tattoo’s will it be a problem clearing the SSB medicals or something?
Is there restrictions bout having a tattoo?kindly please resolve this doubt.
@Admin sir: need your judgment on my story written above.
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It was raining heavily in mawana village and water was logged on roads.At night,rahul came to know about urgent need of O-ve blood for his neighbor heart operation and blood banks were closed.His blood group was O-ve and he knew his two friends with same blood group,so he immediately contacted them and convinced them to reach hospital for blood donation.He went to hospital in stormy weather on foot, as roads were logged with water.He contacted the concerned doctors for operation and donated blood with his friends.He thanked his friends and sent them back.He consoled the family of patient and stayed with them until operation got over.After operation he contacted the doctor and inquired the condition.He took the relatives to canteen and made them relaxed by sharing the success news of operation and had light meals with them.
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thanks sir for creating such a helpful site for us…
sir ihave written two stories one for picture given by you in site
and the later one for blank slide.are both up to the mark .please rate them separately …
and sir please also give idea about phsycological interpretation of srt,s ,wat and how they are matched and cheked with individual personality ..what all issues we shoul keep in mind…
sir i confused with wat .i asked a interview officer .he asked me not to write philosphical sentences like . love gives happiness, leader takes responsillbilties .he said how phsycologist will came to know by reading facts or philosphy..? and said me to write the sentences from heart.wats the idea behind .how pshcoligicalist intrepets sentences and matches with personality..? please give some information on it. it will be beneficial for all.
Hi sir,
Which story do you think will be gud.The 1 i wrote above or the 1 mentioned below.(In short) Mohan’s uncle died due to heart attack.Mohan den decided that he will becum doctor started studying hard and acheived his dream.
I knw this is not a gud story but still i want ma confusion of short term nd long term goal to be cleard.
Kindly rate these 2 stories nd if possible plz give some suggestions too.
Hi,
First of all i m vry thankful to you for creating such a wonderful site.I came to know many of ma mistakes that i made in ma previous SSB’s.
I am a bit confused on this TAT.Can you please explain me if how xactly are we supposed to write the story.I mean are we supposed to write the story keeping long term goal in mind or the short term?Acc to ur post it shows that it should be based on short term.But my doubt is how can we write a story of a man who is shown with a dead body in hospital??Possibly what we can write ( m writing in short) Mr XYX met with an accident and sohan saw it and he took him to hospital where he was declared as dead.Sohan in the mean time informed his family..Will this be fine sir.Please comment asap.I have ma interview in another 3 days.Thanks in advance.
@Alok you wrote a very good story. Keep it up.
@Suraj yes you have a good story and it shows qualiteis which comes up in day to day life.
@Rahul You can write any thing but it should match with picture and bring qualities of you.
sir my hobby is playing games an sports volleyball.
i have written story for blank slide.please give your detailed interpretation on it..
suresh was captain of his college volleyball team.seeing
that there was no volleyball club in his town.he decided
to open a volleyball club there.for that he took help
from railway board there.he met with the sports incharge
there and seeked permission for a idle place there under
railway.he then called all voleey ball lovers in his circle
,made contary for money.with his team members he bought poles,
net,ball,marking powder,rope and named the club as young stars
.with cooperation of all he started it.he organised weekly tornaments
there by which club got success and seeing it other clubs also got
established there and the town became volleyball hub.
can we write stories related to our hobbies
can we write stories related to our hobbies??
Admin sir,Please comment on my story
rahul is a high scool student returning from his friends birthday party.in midway the weather became stormy and rainy so he took shelter near a shop.there he found other people also waiting.seeing the weather becoming worse he informed his parent from his mobile.then he persuaded people not to wait for weather to become calm and made all to took a public transport.he took mobile number of driver to ensure all reached safely.after reaching home he called driver and was pleased to hear saftey of all.
sir please rate my story and
give your views on it.
u have commented for aarav…please comment for me…
u have given comment on anothers story my story is of hero ramu…..please comment on that…..
@Alok
If villagers can afford pucca house then they will definitely make it, do not impose a backwards thinking about villagers they are more intelligent .. You need improvement
@Anupam What kind of discussion ?
Comment Sir?
Please comment on my story sir….
@Admin Sir please can we have some discussion on the TAT you have posted on blog .
Please comment on this sir…
Ramu,student was doing late night study. It was a windy night and raining heavily. He heard a knock on door. He came to see found a lady. He enquired the reason. She told that her sister developing pain in stomach and no one in house apart from me. He immediately went along with her and given some medicine to control her pain but no relief. He immediately took rain coat and reached near by clinic. It was mid night and thunder night so doctor declined his request to see that lady. But he convinced him and takes him to her house. Doctor immediately, checked her, given medicine. Soon the pain under controlled. He thanked doctor and drops him to his house and also returns back to study. He becomes happy to help her on time.
anki went to his village on a vacation.once he was going to hospital,to met his relatives,its to far. in the mid of the way he stuck in the huge thunderstorm.he reached the hospital any how but he realised thunderstorm might be the reason of illness of the patients because most of the houses are not made up of concrete,brick and cement(pucca) so definitely there would be leakage.he knew about the mentality of the villagers that they will definitely ignore his suggestion so he first insisted his relatives for making there house from concrete,brick and cement.after 10 days again village is jolted by a huge thunderstorm but his relatives were saved becoz of there pucca house.now villagers realised the importance of pucca houses ad they also started making pucca houses.
sir your views about the story
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A much needed appreciation sir….Thanx 🙂
@Rathore Story was good, and it shows the lively ness in you and good friendship, you can improve it by good sentence formation .
@Aam Very well done , keep it up .
10 out of 10
Naval was headmaster in the village high school. As always he was on the walk around the fields in the village. But today he was not feeling the fresh air,rather he was coughing due to the polluted air. As he moved on, he saw big flames of fire in the field. He ran up to that field quickly and what he saw was the farmers were burning the waste after cultivating their crop, which was polluting the fresh environment of early morning. On the same evening, Naval with the help of panchayat members talked to the farmers of the village and told them about the new government plans for controlling air pollution, according to which they can sell the waste to fertilizer companies and they should keep some amount of it in fields itself, as it will provide nutrients to the soil for next crop. In this way Naval help the cause of pollution control in his village.
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Admin pls give your views about the story. 🙂
sir,there was pic in which 3 boys were luking to a men jumping in the lake.My story goes like dis.Raj ad 3 of his BEST friends have completed their B.TEch and lend up on good jobs.The were busy wid dere job and family dat dey dint spend time with each other from past 6 month.They planned for a reunion ad choosen a dhaba near the lake for meeting.The low deep area of lake was open for swiming AND TICKET WAS 50 RS PER HEAD.Raj was intersted in getting into the water and practice sum swimming strokes with guidance of one of his friends alok.raj wear the lyf jacket and was lil uncomfortable in goin in the water but he followed alok his instructions and learned some basic strokes.after sum time he got the confidence and started diving in water from smal height.They enjoyed a lot an hugged each other and promised to meet again.Howz was story admin.what are the qualities u can notice.
It doesn’t show any good quality , though your hero realize the importance of time and work but is it a reason people use his examples ?? Many knows the importance of time and work ??
There is not need of creating unnecessary crisis but story should have some difficulty and methods to over come that.
SIR rate mine’s maturity level for the above story….
is it necessary to create CRISIS-condition…
can we write like reel type story start…
PLEASE guide me regarding tis perception…
…… there was a village named after a boy karan who was very lazy, he spend his much time in wasting..he just didnt bother about the surrounding..as ususual one day he become late while coming to his home and suddenly weather got very bad, his way is still too far…he was so hungry so his hunger lead him to travel kilometers toward his home and he finally made it..he ate his dinner and when he was about to sleep he introspected the journey of night mare while coming his home..he realised the need of time and importance of work for livelihood is hidden in will and hunger for a thing to do it although here cause was for hunger but from the next day he changed his old routine..and started working to add up a liveli hood for his family..seeing this change all villagers used to use his story/name for motivating/taunting their childrens for importance of work…
@ArunM
Its not long if you can write it in given time…and the story is also very good and commendable 🙂 keep it up .
Arijit was a a final year b.arch student. He belonged to Bhangel village. Once, while returning home, strong winds started blowing and it started raining soon. Arijit took shelter in the school building and waited for the bad weather to subside. The winds were very strong and even a tree was uprooted. Soon the weather passed and Arijit set out. En route to his home he started thinking about what he saw earlier. “If a strong tree could be uprooted by such winds, how can the huts in our villages be safe?”
This prompted him to talk to his professor at the college who talked to the village elders and they agreed to build pucca houses. Every villager pooled in their money and their efforts to build Stronger houses for the villagers. Even Arijit and his friends helped. Now every house in the village is strong enough to withstand strong winds and Arijit is a successful architect himself.
How is this sir?
Is it too long?
Sir tell me are there any improvements tad u can see from my response on below words:
1)TEAM-the surya kiran aerobatic team display motivates the youth to join air force
2)YOUTH-can bring postive changes to the society by joining IPS,IAS and armed forces.
3)FORCE-power of will force the man/womwan to perform
4)SAFE-Regular use of dettol soap can keep one safe from dirt and infection
5)money-satisfaction in work is above money
6)ATTACK-is the best defense.
7)KILL-a soldier never think about getting killed becz hez trained to fight
8)sick;excercise regularly reduces the sickness from body
9)love-trust is the important part of love
@admin any improvement to be done in the stories
@ Anupam both the stories are quite good. 🙂
Sir please comment on my story and please rate it.
Ganesh was a doing his B.Sc. from government college in his village. Once he was returning to his home from market, it started raining heavily.So he decided to stop under the shed for the rain to stop. While standing there he saw harvested crops getting spoiled due to rain. So he with the help of the people standing under the shed moved the harvested crops to a dry place near the farms.When the rain stopped he informed the owner of the farm about the crops while returning to his home. The farm owner thanked him on saving his crops.
Sir please comment on this story.
Atish was pursuing graduation in the local college in his village.That day he was returning to his home from his friend’s place after studying as he had an exam the next day.
But it started raining heavily so he stopped under the shed beside the road for the rain to stop.In this mean time he got a call from the hospital on his mobile that a patient needs O+
blood in emergency because there is shortage of O+. As, he was voluntary donar in some of the hospitals . So he decided to move to the hospital in the heavy rain and reach hospital as quickly as possible. He also informed his mother that he might get late as he is going to the hospital for donating blood.He walked quickly and reached the hospital on time .He donated the blood to the patient. Till that time rain also stopped so he was able to return to his home on time.
Sir please comment on this story.
Sir tell me are there any improvements tad u can see from my response on below words:
1)TEAM-the surya kiran aerobatic team display motivates the youth to join air force
2)YOUTH-can bring postive changes to the society by joining IPS,IAS and armed forces.
3)FORCE-power of will force the man/womwan to perform
4)SAFE-Regular use of dettol soap can keep one safe from dirt and infection
5)money-satisfaction in work is above money
6)ATTACK-is the best defense.
7)KILL-a soldier never think about getting killed becz hez trained to fight
8)sick;excercise regularly reduces the sickness from body
9)love-trust is the important part of love
@Arjun concept it good but you can still make your story good by using suitable words and sentence formation.
@Vicky Yes WAT is really a hard nut to crack… all you can do is practice a lot, and naturally it will come to you:)
sir…please let me know the negativities for my story.
vyshak is a doctor hailing from remote village.He came to know one old man is suffering from high fever.He is going to help the old man.Since no transport facilties are there to reachthe old mans house,he is walking to the old mans house.He is facing difficulties walking throughthe rough climate.But he is trying his best to reach there and save the old man.At last he reaches there and cures the old man with tablets in his pocket.
I am really confused that what excatly i have to write in WAT…I have seen couple of blogs,read different books but none gave me an idea….What i feel is my degree of association is not correct or my response lacks sense….
@Vicky Nothing is meaning less , every sentence has a meaning but the thing is your maturity level coming out from the above sentences is not up to the mark.
sir what are the shortcomings in my sentences?are they meaning less or not signifying any meaning
@Awdesh You can think of a problematic situation from the picture happened in the past and make a story in that.
@vicky you need to improve.
@Rahul …. your story is shows so much negative sense that assessor will never read it fully and reject you . Do not write any thing related to suicide .
there is a picture in tad a guy is standing on the table and putting the rope on the fan.my story was lyk dis….. vikas was in 2rd year B.TECH mechanical engineering and was a spoil brat becz of his bad friend circle in the colez.His performance was very poor in d xams and teachers had warned him tad if this tym hez nt goin to perform he will b restigated.He tried to study bt unable to grasp and learn.He was frustated and tensed tad he decided to suicide in his hostel ROOM.When he put the rope in his neck he was bear d pressure on wind pipe and tuk the rope out.He realized tad it is even hard to die.He went to the professors to teach him the lessons again but denied.But,yes dey give him sum important links about the video courses by IIT teachers on internet.He followed the video courses and doubts in tad he asked his teachers after regular class to get it more cleared,he covered up 60% and passed the exams.All of his bad habits were reduced and by seeing his progress,the other guys also get motivated to perform.
Sir, i m posting my response on few words.I’l will be really thankful if you can analyze my response and let me know wot are my shortcomings.
1)Courage-is a step to move with my work under pressure
2)kill-HIT is the cockroach killer
3)freedom- is enjoyment with responsibility
4)commander-he gives clear briefing to his men or he makes the objective of a mission clear to his men
5)junior-with whom ur mistakes can be shared so tad he can learn to tackle the problems
6)Health-eating boiled veggie is one way of maintaing good health
7)country-i am a good citizen of my country
8)disgust-failures disgust but analyzing it makes the way
sir some pictures are neutral .means scene in that is neither +ve nor -ve.in those how can i make a story which shows qualities of the hero
@ Leader takes the responsibility of his/her followers ….Yes you sentence shows the quality of responsibility in you.
leader-takes the responsibility of the group.How is my response on the above word?What u can potray admin from my response?
@Rahul
well done
9 out of 10
admin howz d story…
ramesh was a B.A graduate hailing from a small village of Uttar pradesh.His father was sarpanch of the village.Ramesh was preparing for IAS and every month in the starting weeks he used to go to magazine shop to buy Pratiyogita darpan as dere was limited stocks.It was monsoon season,he went to take the book on monday and wen he was on his way his father called him and told him about sum women along wid there small babies had cum to seek help becz dere babies didnt take the polio drops on sunday becz of heavy rain.His father instructed him to go to d doctor and report him about the situation.He went dere but the shop was fully packed with patients,he requested the assistant to report the problem to doctor.The doc as he was busy culdnt be able to go to his village so he juz instructed him about how to give polio drops.He tuk d small bottles and walked towars his village and gave the drops to the babies.
@Harman try to think something new..your story is very common …
Feedback @ADMIN….???
Raj was a science student. He used to attend the college in the town 20 kms away from his village. His village had a problem of water shortage. Once while coming back from college it was raining heavily. Raj saw a small hole nearby the road filled with water. He was struck with an idea for solving the water shortage problem in the village. The next day he with his friends went to the sarpanch and explained him the idea of collecting and saving rain water in big tanks and they would become self sufficient by implying the idea. Soon the idea was implemented and big tanks were constructed in each house with minimum amount of money and with the man power in the village itself and the water shortage problem was solved. Ral with the help of his friends help the nearby villages im implementing this idea and was appreciated for his efforts.
@ Varun..OTA call letter comes after all other entries like IMA TGC UES..so you need to wait for some more time… 🙂
Regarding your story it was little bit clumsy.
” while on road he saw some people stopped by the old shelter he went in to the place and found one of the guy got injured ” HE should take the help of others who were standing there…
” then he called his fellow from the factory who is a doctor in there” hope instead of calling a doc from Electric workshop you should find a way to take him to the nearest hospital..By calling someone from factory you are entirely depending on the 3rd person…what if he do not reach on time ??? Hope you understand..
sir i cleared cdsI for ota but I hav’nt got my call letter..want to know when will be the ssb @admin sir please rate my story also
ramesh is a elecrical technician working in a govt factory near a purnia village.one day when he is leaving for home weather got bad, he try to get home as soon as possible while on road he saw some people stopped by the old shelter he went in to the place and found one of the guy got injuired due to tree falled on him ,he understood the problem and asked about his family and informed them by calling them, then he called his fellow from the factory who is a doctor in there, to come there as soon as posssible as rain stops,ramesh took out his tools to get the power in shelter and told other people to stay there for a time until rain stops, ramesh cleaned the wound of the guy and told him to rest, in morning when rain stopped his doctor friend come to that place with his office vehicle, gave the injuired guy some pain killer and took him to the government hopital.Doctor told that he will be fine after some time,parent of that boy thanked him alot, he also got praised at his factory and received an award for helping.
why ssb gto give blank picture . what he want to analyse through this picture
@admin sir please rate my story
rohan was a social worker . he works for a ngo.it was harvesting time for farmers .e got the news that the harvested crops are lying on ground and heavy strom is opprocing towars feilds which will spoil the hard work of farmers. when he reached feilds heavy rain started. it was dust all around and visiblity was also low . he immidiatly carried the grains to nearest godaon fist and then the crops .with his efforts all grains and harvested crops were safe .his saved the income of farmers and also protected their life support.
For OTA it will take more time.
@ ADMIN : Would you happen to know if the call letter has been dispatched for the SSB for the OTA?
Kaprykon Nice story 🙂
@ Admin : Will this story work?
Raj was coming home from work on a cold stormy evening.At first he felt that he would reach home before the weather got any worse,but the downpour only got worst.He took shelter underneath some trees.And as he stood there,he heard a loud cry for help,he rushed towards the direction from where he heard the cry,and in front of him he saw what remained of a destroyed hut because of the storm.quickly he started searching underneath the ruins only to find a small little girl fighting for life against the weight of the debris.he quickly pulled her out and asked if there were others also in danger. She said no and that her parents were out working the fields of others in another village and hadn’t come back yet.he wrapped her up with whatever material he could find and then carrying her on his back ran as fast as his legs could take him towards the nearest village to help her. The village doctor saw her and gave her the required medicines and advised that she must get a lot of rest.
Admin sir thanks
@Rahul Here which quality you want to impose with your story ? Actually I am unable to understand what he Shyam actually doing 🙂 🙂
@RON nice story 🙂
shyam was a young,middle class farmer in a small district of U.P.There was water scarcity and its delaying the rice crop to put in feilds.He was invited to attend a marriage party in nearby village which is 4km from his home.he attended and whole he was about to reach home at 4pm he noticed dark clouds and heavy burst of storm and predicted heavy rain.He tuk the rice seeds and went to his feild with torch ,polythene sheet .He put the seed on the feild in 1 hour and while returning home it rained so he protected himself wid sheet and reached home with help of torch.
Rajiv was a native of ralegam sidhi a village
15 k away from the main city.Rajiv was working
as a clerk in PWD office he often comes late in night after
completing his work in office.This was the time of winter and
heavy rains were pouring in .One day when He was returning to his
village heavy rains and thunderstorm stuck his way he opened his umbrella
and continued he saw a lady from neighboring village with his 4 year old son
waiting near the tin shed as it was getting dark he gave his umbrella to women
and accompanied her to his village.
thanks sir….i will try to improve it
@Rahul Your story is not properly managed,I didn’t understand. Write it in clearly and correctly.
@RON,
First half of your story doesn’t match with your story, it seems you have a ready made story so that you can fix it with any picture.
Why should one go by walk to attend a interview??
Did you read the post??? did you see the key words according to the picture given in the post??
You the made a story for namesake and trying to show the qualities which never matches with your picture.
Hope you understand what I mean, you will get 10 pictures in TAT , which story you will write when you actually see a picture related to Interview ??
There is no need of doing extra effort to make a story…check the story made by “praveen”
sir give feedback on my story
Abhimanu after completing his engineering in computer science from nerhu engineering institute chandigarh was looking for a job so that he can support his family .he immediately forwarded his resume in various companies and gave enterence in various company but due to sudden recession in IT sector the intake of companies slowed down in the mean time he gave private tutions to student preparing for engineering enterence exam.As it was monsoon season heavy rains sruck city and abhimanu got call for attending interview in bangalore he left city fighting heavy rains and reached bangalore on time and gave interview.
How was my story ADMIN?Do tell my mistakes
shyam was a middle class farmer in d small village called dubola of district BASTI(U.P);month of june and water scarcity for feilds to grow paddy;he got invitation for attending his cousins marriage from nearby village majhari 4 km frm DUBOLA;marriage party was gud;on his return journey he observed heavy storm and dark clouds and predicted heavy rains;
walked slowly and reached home;he tuk paddy ,torch and a polyethene sheet;he put the paddy roots in d field;it was raining heavnly,cover himself with sheet an directed him towars home with torch
i am not the same praveen and i saw and wrote on the blog only today ….@admin when do they call for ues pfy candidates for interview generally
@ nice one Praveen , 8 out of 10 .
venkat was doing his final year mechanical engineering in krishna college of technology.he came to his native in semester vacations in the month of July .he visited his friends and relatives in the day.while coming from his friends house it started to rain,he borrowed his friend’s umbrella and began to walk to his home.while on the way he saw his neighbour near a shelter .he called him and shared his umbrella and took her to home and he also returned home….
rate this story admin
@ Admin Kindly Rate my Story. I liked this site
Ram is 24 year old gradute student. He is coming back to his village rampur after attending NCC camp .on his way heavy rainstorm and thunderstorm strikes.while on his way he saw that there are two dacoit holding rifles were looting a persons. After seeing He call the police by his Mobile and hided himself in the bushes and monitor there movement he saw that one the dacoit has gone for peeing and one of them holding targeting rifle on the person who’s is bent down on the knees.He then slowly go towrds him and hit him on his hand so that rifle will get escaped from his hand. and he quickly pick up the rifle shot him in his knees.the second one after hearin the shot come near but as the forst was already down we have already taken our positons and shot at him.but He is able toescape from the site In the mean time police Zipsy has come to the site.they arrsted the one and recommende his name for the bravery award
@Jatinder
There is nothing like mistakes but make a good story which puts your strong psychology in front.. check the posts related to TAT
@admin….sir plz tel me the mistake in my story?that ways i wil be able to improve upon specific points??????
@ Jatinder
Your Story is very normal, please improve it I have seen that most of the story above are on same theme so thinks something different.
admin plz give assessment on my story
@admin…..amit was a college student who was doing his bachelors in science. He was staying with his family in village. One day his father told him that his sister who was studying in the city and was staying in the hostel will be coming to home but since her classes got over late so she will be late and amit father told him to go and receive her as she will be late. Amit contacted her sister and left early so as to reach well before time.he went by walking but on the way he started raining fast but amit continued inspite of thay,reached the place on time,met her sister. In the meantime rain also stopped and they came back home.
Thnx admin and ajay. Can you please share how can i start in GD. This time i want to select
Thnx
Dilip your 2nd story is good but here if you see the picture it demands something else ( something more challenging ).
In your story the theme is totally different because in the picture you can see the person is struggling with the bad climate isn’t it??
Story should match with the picture , else its of no use. You can use the 2nd story if you find a picture related to it. Hope you understood what i mean 🙂
Hi admin. Good evening. Please give a broad assessment on my last story.. I’ll be thankful to youHi admin. Good evening. Please give a broad assessment on my last story.. I’ll be thankful to you
@aravind: mention the hero by just a simple name.It shd be u.No need a sarpanch or so.story gud.
@ Praveen, Its a weak story try to make something which related with the situation shown in the picture, Mahesh was a Manager so he must not be roaming on foot so that he need to encourage his friends to travel by walk even in heavy rain or bad weather ?? Mahesh is not in WAR, so why he is forcing his friends to come out in the bad weather ??? He should take care of his friends or not??? By adding such line you will never show that you can take challenge ??
@ Aravind I liked your story .
Hi Admin Can you please comments on my story……
Please interpret my story.. Thanks
Mahesh was manager in a reputed pvt bank in a city. During vacation he decided to spent time in his village Rampur. Around 20 km from his village there was one old fort over a hill. He sat to see the fort with his friends. After 10 km on the way, the weather became windy and rough. Despite that Mahesh encouraged his colleagues and continued with the journey. Around 11 am they reached the fort and it was very splendid and marvelous. It was rich of architect and sculpture. Mahesh took snaps around the fort and had lunch and returned back in the evening. It was memorable day of Mahesh’s life.Mahesh was manager in a reputed pvt bank in a city. During vacation he decided to spent time in his village Rampur. Around 20 km from his village there was one old fort over a hill. He sat to see the fort with his friends. After 10 km on the way, the weather became windy and rough. Despite that Mahesh encouraged his colleagues and continued with the journey. Around 11 am they reached the fort and it was very splendid and marvelous. It was rich of architect and sculpture. Mahesh took snaps around the fort and had lunch and returned back in the evening. It was memorable day of Mahesh’s life.
thnx for earlier comments . Can you please comment on this. Bcoz i am going SSB coming October. This time i want to select….
Mohan was a sarpanch of Zaria village. He went to near by city to purchase some seeds. While coming back to his home town, there was a huge thunderstorm and heavy lightning. Mohan tried to reach asap to his home but unfortunately the rain has started so he find some shelter to stand. Already some peoples stand in nearby shelter, Mohan also joined with them. Suddenly one huge tree has fallen down in center of the road. At the time there was an ambulance with the emergency patient need to cross the road. Without evacuate the tree, ambulance could not able to move further so Mohan asked help to evacuate the tree from road side. Finally the tree has evacuated from the road side and got an ambulance get a way to go hospital.
Hey, admin. I’ve just tried to think in other way. How is this story? ThanksHey, admin. I’ve just tried to think in other way. How is this story? Thanks
It was an amazing evening, wind was blowing, birds were singing and the green fields were giving an awesome view of the nature. Dilip has come to his native village rampur for vacation after his BA(mass communication) final year exam. He was just walking in the fields and was enjoying the beauty of the nature. Suddenly, he thought that these feeling must be shared with the people. He hired a video grapher started a documentary on nature and village. He made a group of villagers. He trained and briefed them about his plan. He went to fields, gardens, orchards and villages. After the sincere work of his team, a documentary film was ready.he thanked the team and struggled a lot to get it transmitted to national tv. Villagers were happy because now the people will get attracted by the beauty of nature and come back to the shrine environment of villages. So, Dilip was happy. It was an amazing evening, wind was blowing, birds were singing and the green fields were giving an awesome view of the nature. Dilip has come to his native village rampur for vacation after his BA(mass communication) final year exam. He was just walking in the fields and was enjoying the beauty of the nature. Suddenly, he thought that these feeling must be shared with the people. He hired a video grapher started a documentary on nature and village. He made a group of villagers. He trained and briefed them about his plan. He went to fields, gardens, orchards and villages. After the sincere work of his team, a documentary film was ready.he thanked the team and struggled a lot to get it transmitted to national tv. Villagers were happy because now the people will get attracted by the beauty of nature and come back to the shrine environment of villages. So, Dilip was happy.
@Pankaj
Such stories will never work for you,you need to practice a lot.
Amit became an Officer just by fighting with bad weather ??? is this you want to say.
How easily Amit became an officer, you just mentioned about the difficulty he faced by weather condition, nothing about the difficulty he faced during his preparation and what about the course of SSB interview.
Do you think it shows your strong psychology.
Think out of the box Pankaj, psychologist read such stories each and every time…so write something original..
Hi, admin. I’m going for ssb this in oct this year. Please interpret my story. ThanksHi, admin. I’m going for ssb this in oct this year. Please interpret my story. Thanks
Amit was going to examination bonuse for appearing in upsc (NDA) exam. When he started from his house the weather not quite good. But, he didn’t stop because he want to achieve his aim and he had only one thing in mind chances never wait you, you have to attain it. But, mid way, weather became rough and stormy. After so many difficulties, he reached to examination center and appear in that and qualified. Now, these days, he is an officer in indian army.
It will be much better then the previous one . Do not mention unnecessary things, say there was only one private hospital in the locality, instead of mentioning there was no Govt hospital.
yhanx a lot sir for your concern..
sir if in starting i will put the intro of doctor friend and also give the point of fnancial problem of family…and thrd one if i say that there is only private hospital in nearby town instead of govt 1.den what will be the rating…????
@ Aravind you need to understand first, your story is not at all showing any maturity. Please check the post regarding ” how to write in TAT”.
Your chain snatching story is not at all matching with picture, it looks like you can post this story with any picture.Please think before making a story.
How Raja caught the thief so easily, was thief also running on foots like Raja ?? or Raja was a superman to catch him without any difficulty ?
You could mention some qualities while catching the thief but you simply wrote it as if its daily job of Raja to catch such thief , isn’t it ?
refer to above stories …
Raja is living in a small village and he did ITI near to his home town. After completion of his course he got a job as a technician at Car Company. It’s near to his village. One day while he was coming back to home after completion of his work there was a huge thunderstorm and heavy lightning. Raja is very much careful and walking fast to reach his home. While crossing to the old lady, one guy who is snatching the chain from the old lady. Raja immediately followed that guy and caught. He get backed the chain to old guy and immediately reported to the nearest police station with that guy. Moreover Raja gets thanks from old lady and greet from police officer. Finally he reached before the rain.
Can you plese comment on this. and rate it becuase 2 times i am screened out in SSB
@Siddhart
1 how can an engineers built a Dam in a residential place???
2 “an to a phone booth near by him and call the civil engineering department ” due to thunder storm if also we assume that the phone line are working fine , how could Anuj got the contact number of civil engineering department, again things going according to the writers wish.
3 ” getting rewards at last is not a good psychology “
3 out of 10
@ gurseak
1 “old lady is suffering from high fever and his daughter is weeping besides “– Don’t do grammatical mistakes. Also why old lady’s daughter is crying, is there any financial problem ?? At last why Mohit is paying from his pocket ?? Did you mention about any financial problem??
2 Also Mohits friend was doing MMBS, this should come at the starting, not when you need a doctor according to your story, so think first and arrange the things accordingly .
3 “Next morning he and his firend take the lady to govt hospital ” how much govt hospitals charge as you mentioned that Mohit paid from his pocket ??–its shows that wantedly you want to bring attention towards Mohit’s quality of being a good human being.
4 out of 10
Thanks a lot admin.. It’s feeling good. plz promulgate more pics..
sir plaese rate the story..
Mohit a computer science engineer was coming back to his home form his friend’s house. During his way back the weather condition became worse so he tried to find some shelter to protect himself.so he went to the home nearby through whih candle light is coming out..reaching dere he found that the old lady is suufernig from high fever and his daughter is weeping besides her.he immediately called his friend from whose house he was coming back as he was doing mbbs. He told him about the situation and told him to bring some medicine here..by taking that medicines tha lady was able to spend her night peacfuully and the next morning he and his firend take the lady to govt hospital ,saved her lifeand gave all the expenses form his pocket.both ladies thanked mohit and his friend for this act.
anuj was comming back to his home by meeting his friend home mayank suddenly he obsorb the heavy thuder strom wd heavy rain fall there . he suddenly started to search a safe place after some time he saw a big banyan tree he took shelter there . he was cleanig him self suddenly he saw leakage in dam n a over flow of water then he did not care about the rain he just ran to a phone booth near by him and call the civil engineering department n told him abt the conditions of dam n water flow in it after 2 hour engineering team arrived n they work for a hole night and recontructed that damage part of dam , with this effort of anuj n engeerings ther where able to save the life of village peoples and later on he was recomemded a bravery award from his state (u.p ) goverment
All the best Gaurav 🙂
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thank you..sir
i’ll keep it in mind…anywz i am goin to banglore tomm for SSB…
so thanks for everything,,
🙂
Thats the way Niraj keep it up
Thanx admin,I will try to improve..
Gaurav again the theme is same and the most common mistake which candidates do.
Aditya is teaching villager farmers how to do farming, a boy who is just an agriculture student telling experienced villager about farming.
Villagers are doing farming since Aditya was a small kid.
” it also shows that your thinking is villagers are not so efficient in farming ” which is totally Absurd.
2 out of 10
Make a good one .
Dilip very well done.Its has almost every possible qualities . But still you can put some more points, here doctor will only come with him if he has a proper safety transport or any other source , so mention it also.
9 out of 10
Thanq Admin.Your comment is a booster to me.
Hey admin.. How is this story?i’ve accidentally pasted the story twice in the comment box. Please ignore it and rate my story please
Aditya was aggricultre student in pune,After completting his garduation aditya went to his villege,RAMPUR ,.he was very happy to meet his faimly and his old frnds.
when he was goin to meet his friend, he jus observed that the farm which were not lookng gud due to improper planning.so he decided to explain all people about the agriculture .next mornning he asked all farmers of villege to gather in ground.
After that aditya exaplain them few very important points about farming.
all people were very impressed by him and decided to apply those tips.after a few month farmers were very happy to see the result.by seing this aditya was very happy with his work and decided to start a monthly lecture about farming in villege.
Sonu was preparing for his final exam. While studying late night, he got persistent knock at his doors. His neighbour, an old lady approached him for getting help as his son was suffering from high fever. He assured her and left for a local doctor who was residing in the neighbouring village. On the way, he faced with inclement weather followed by heavy rain and thunderstorm. He continued his journey and reached the doctor’s house. As doctor was reluctant to attend the patient mid night , he convinced and persuaded him to leave for the patient. They reached his neighbour’s house on time and doctor gave the necessary medication which relaxed him to some extent. He then, escorted the doctor to his house and thanked him. The very next morning, he took the patient to the district hospital which was 20 km away. Sonu was preparing for his final exam. While studying late night, he got persistent knock at his doors. His neighbour, an old lady approached him for getting help as his son was suffering from high fever. He assured her and left for a local doctor who was residing in the neighbouring village. On the way, he faced with inclement weather followed by heavy rain and thunderstorm. He continued his journey and reached the doctor’s house. As doctor was reluctant to attend the patient mid night , he convinced and persuaded him to leave for the patient. They reached his neighbour’s house on time and doctor gave the necessary medication which relaxed him to some extent. He then, escorted the doctor to his house and thanked him. The very next morning, he took the patient to the district hospital which was 20 km away.
Ajay , very good story .
good points :
1 Rahul is aware of rain and he took a shelter to protect himself.
2 Rahul reacted quickely after observing that climate is getting worse.
3 Rahul took quick possible action to protect villagers .
4. This story shows a practice possibility and maturity.
8 out of 10
Niraj first of all there is no CDSE level or xyz level of TAT.
Coming to your story, its not even average I am sorry but its not showing any quality and maturity.
1. Anuj was in football team but in the picture there is nothing relevant to football, like a jersey and shorts or football shoes Anuj carrying after practice . Its a very irrelevant theme and imagination.
2 Anju waited till till 7pm because of bad weather but why did he went on in a bad weather, he could do this earlier also, so why did he waited for so long?
3 There is no difficulty faced by the Anuj to reach home.
on the whole 3 out of 10
please tell me a story on the following slide:
there are two men and one bike in the picture.
one man is well dressed and standing beside the bike , the other man looks like a worker and he is fixing the tyre of the bike. please tell a story on this one.
@Admin: Sir,Is this story fine for CDSE level.
anuj was a B.Sc Final year student.He was in his college football team.he used to practice in the college till 6pm.one day he has to reach on his sister’s birthday celebration in evening by 7pm.And he has to be in practice since he was to play a important match next day.while returning weather went bad.he waited in the college for weather to be clear.but after 7pm he moved on to his house.Passing through bad weather he reached his house half hour late.And they celebrated his sisters birthday.
How is this story admin???any mistakes?
Rahul is an young graduate who is coming from his frnds house late night.On his way to his house heavy rain dropped in with huge thunders and lightnings.He ran under the village community building for shelter.He understood that the rain is getting worse and observed many people in huts lying inside and the water pouring into their huts.He sensed trouble and ran with huge leaves which are lying there, by keeping on his head to the village sarpanch’s house.He expalined the situation to the sarpanch,took keys of the community building,and with the help of young men evacuated the people under huts to the community building.That night rain turned to cyclone and many huts were damaged.But all thanked Rahul for his timely action which saved many lives.
dear friend, people in hut are having no problem then when the hero is bothering?????
next surpanch is the person who know all the problems of the village…. so the story is fictitious. its going as per your own way. change it
its good ..story should be in past …i.e rahul was